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24 July 2008 @ 03:44 pm
Ficlet: I Will Remember You  
Title:  I Will Remember You
Rating:  Pg-13 maybe
Pairings:  Draco/Harry
Warnings:  Slash, Angst but hope infused too.
Disclaimer:  Harry Potter belongs to J.K. Rowling and Warner Bros. I do not own a thing, am not making any money or anything like that! But anything you do not recognize is mine. :]
Status:  Complete!
Summary:  One last look before finally moving on
Author’s Notes:  The words just started coming to me, so I wrote before I lost them! Just a quick little ficlet. 

It had been two whole years but still he remembered. He remembered the way messy hair fell in his face. The way his glasses perched on his nose and caught rays of sunshine in the summertime. He remembered the way his body squirmed, flushing with unbridled passion. Taut in ways that would make them both scream all night long. His face had a way of displaying emotion that left no fear as to what everything meant to him.

Every night he wished only the good memories would seep in and out of his mind. It was at night, horror of the ending came to him. Silently first, dodging at the very edges in a haunting illusion of blood and pain. Soon enough, the horror grew until nothing else existed.

He would remember the battle, blood splashed on every surface, bodies strewed about the floor. Screaming echoed in a rhythm with cries of despair. Light flashed, the sight of green, becoming the very symbol of the war. The color had come for him but had melted into the body of another. His lover. The glassy unseeing eyes haunted him most of all.

It was time, finally. He had to move on and leave this all behind. This place, his face. He would always remember, but life was passing him by. He had died to give him the light and it was now the moment to step into it.
 
 
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fuck you i'm awesome.: [davey havok][info]whisperings on July 24th, 2008 08:34 pm (UTC)
Very sad, very beautiful.
I like it! ^.^
Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 24th, 2008 09:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading and thanks for the comment. Sad and beautiful is what I was going for!
Raven[info]aki_hoshi on July 24th, 2008 09:21 pm (UTC)
I agree with [info]whisperings. Sad, but so beautiful. Gave me an idea about the perception of the colour green in my own fic...
Trisha: drarry flying[info]lasting_melodys on July 24th, 2008 09:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading, Raven. :] Glad I could inspire an idea! I'll have to read your fic, then.
Raven[info]aki_hoshi on July 24th, 2008 09:48 pm (UTC)
Oh, goodness, no! Not yet, anyhow. :P I'm actually in the process of sorta "re-doing" the earlier chapters, 'cause they suck (I wrote them four years ago).

But that's a whole long story...lol.
Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 24th, 2008 09:55 pm (UTC)
-grins- You are silly. I bet they do not suck at all. Then you are being a story!tease. Shame, shame xD
Trixie[info]xwhimsyx on July 24th, 2008 09:53 pm (UTC)
Hauntingly beautiful, I'd put it. (I agree with the others, lol!) That was great, Trish! =]
Trisha: Buffy[info]lasting_melodys on July 24th, 2008 09:56 pm (UTC)
MY TRIX! -snuggles- Thank you my dear. I wrote it in about ten minutes while sitting here waiting for a phone call xD
lijahlover-Amy: Sexy Slytherin-Draco[info]lijahlover on July 24th, 2008 11:56 pm (UTC)
I loved every word amazing!
Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 25th, 2008 03:15 am (UTC)
-beams- Thank you very much!
Stolen Childe: DHSpikeQuote[info]stolen_childe on July 25th, 2008 03:19 am (UTC)
Sad but very lovely. I enjoyed it very much!
Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 26th, 2008 07:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.
violetage[info]violetage on July 25th, 2008 11:33 am (UTC)
very nice, but one small point.

*taunt* = to torment or tease in the sense of school kid exchanges

I believe the word you want is *Taut* which means drawn tight, as of a guitar string or tense muscles.

Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 26th, 2008 07:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

-slaps forehead- Thank you very bringing that to my attention. I should have noticed that!
thrnbrooke[info]thrnbrooke on July 26th, 2008 03:19 am (UTC)
Hauntingly beautiful!
Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 26th, 2008 07:26 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much dear! -snuggles-
tom_girl101[info]tom_girl101 on July 26th, 2008 04:21 pm (UTC)
i love it and its sad
Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 26th, 2008 07:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I tried to hit the balance between loss and hope.
Bee: Barney=awesome[info]callmebee on July 26th, 2008 05:00 pm (UTC)
I saw your icon, and decided then and there to read your fic :o)

I liked this quite a bit. It wasn't the mushy crappy angst that so many drarry authors get into the habit of. It was much more, dare I say, real?

Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on July 26th, 2008 07:31 pm (UTC)
-beams- It is a wonderful icon and nice to know it can entice people in haha.

Thank you! That means a LOT. I cannot stand a lot of the mushy angst because it does not seem real. I also think there is a way to write angst that does not leave someone feeling so sad. There is a way to infuse hope, a great example I think would be the movie Titanic. xD Yes, her love died but he gave her everything she needed to really live. To me the ending is of beautiful hope and is inspiring.

Therefore, I like to write things that can be inspiring and have a lot of emotion, which means it takes me longer to churn things out haha
Bee[info]callmebee on July 27th, 2008 04:48 pm (UTC)
Which I think is ok. I was curious, do you mind if I friend you? I mean, I watch hp_addicts, but is it ok if I add you to my f-list?
Trisha: Awesome Ruler Barney[info]lasting_melodys on July 30th, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
Sure! You can friend me and after you do, I'll friend you back!
Faith[info]faithwood on August 3rd, 2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
OMG! I'm not reading! It's angst! It's sad, isn't it? Isn't it! Aaaaarrrrggghhh!

*scared*
Trisha[info]lasting_melodys on August 9th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
LOL. Silly goose! :] Yes, it is sad but it is hopeful too!

You know you want to reeaddd itttt -tempts with cookies- hehe
 
 

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